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Saturday, April 16, 2016

the first stanzas of my novella-poem "Sludge White and the Seven Curmudgeons"

while waiting on the queen of need to muster her forces for her final assault on my beloved Curmudgeons, my muse spent a good part of the week resting up, and i revisited the first pages of my story, which had gotten scant attention in the two years since i wrote them, having at the time no idea of what i'd embarked upon.  here then, are the first, freshly spruced stanzas, seeing my amply-hearted heroine safely through her first night in the forest.
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a tale is told of an unresponsive king
of the sort often surfacing in fiction,
whose second wife was a vain and haughty thing
much given to concocting contradiction.
now he wasn't a benevolent monarch
but proponents of exception seldom are.
as privileged patrons of plutocracy go
his malevolence was rather under par.

his overlooked daughter of an unfulfilled heart
gazing at the world through diffident eyes
wore singular skin of an uncanny hue,
very like mayonnaise just after it dies.
in the dark it emitted an eerie glow
and though genetics might have played a factor,
most likely it came from eating the produce
grown downwind from a nuclear reactor.

it's said her lips were red as royal rubies,
since her overbite was always drawing blood.
and the bloom in her cheeks was likened to a rose
that an early frost has nipped in the bud.
when the powers handed out attributes
the bestowers of beauty must have bypassed her.
for her countenance was compared frequently
with the prospect of impending disaster.

she was prone to pacing the ramparts at night,
a muddied snow pallor lighting up her face;
looming like a phantom or will-o'-the-wisp,
solacing the sadness that haunted the place.
the sentries attended her sweeping glances.
in her glimmer dozing children flouted fear.
she was christened Sludge White by the town criers,
Princess Pasty by those friends that held her dear.

but the queen could not be counted among them
for she was nursing an astonishing spite
and constantly plotted against the princess
in the disconsolate hours of the night.
poor Pasty seemed to stimulate her envy
though why this was the case was hard to answer.
yet the queen had conjured the green-eyed monster
and it swallowed up her soul like a cancer.

her most treasured possession was a mirror
hosting a waggish, irreverent essence,
partial to bouts of ironic reflection,
slinging remarks, and concealing his presence.
obscenely obsessed with smiting competition
she kept him unremittingly on call,
to pry on her peers and relentlessly tell her
that she was rated fairest overall.

as this dull repetition grew wearisome
the mischievous mirror had devised a prank.
and when next his thoughts were sought on the standings
Sludge White was ensconced in preeminent rank.
but this thrust Her Highness into a frenzy
for her hubris could tolerate no equal.
and reviewing her notes on Medea's exploits
she set her sights on mounting a sequel.

when the mirror glimpsed this grisly ambition
his sheen glazed over with a shocked pink regret.
for he was loathe to see harm befall Pasty,
thus augmenting his prodigious karmic debt.
but alas! his fear of rebuke was too great
for recanting the rashly planted rumour.
while the queen showed scanty sense of proportion,
she was entirely bereft of humour.

hence he observed an ambivalent silence
when a woodcutter was summoned to the throne,
and compelled to grovel in the pitiless dust
of jarring remorselessness set in stone.
he appeared not to heed the deep-seated need
to fill such a stark, uninhabited part
that triggered the barter of the woodsman's life
for a casket embellished with Sludge White's heart.

and the carpenter was stricken speechless,
but dared not disobey an overlord's demands.
for cruelty is ever the first resort
in Christendom's clique of self-preserving lands.
so he blindly stumbled into the forest,
a condemned accomplice, untethered from hope
shrinking from the trusting hand of the princess
as though he was shying from the hangman's rope.
  
racking his brain in a bruising torment,
reeling from instructions he couldn't even say
he searched for a miracle to save both their hearts
from this brutal, unendurable day.
it was then that unseen powers stepped in,
altering events in their elemental guise.
for Pasty caught wind of unexpressed death
twisted in the panic that was fleeing his eyes.

the forest hushed, as if gathering breath.
then it raised a lament like a reticent sigh.
and she took to her heels with all of her might,
skimming the surface and appearing to fly.
and the trees clasped branches once she passed them.
and shadows descended to cloak her path from sight.
and the trembling woodsman fell to his knees,
sobbing whilst abandon settled in with the night.

Sludge White touched down in a patch of mushrooms
of psychedelic hue and a staggering size
just as the dusk secured her seclusion,
draping its veil over periwinkle skies.
cedars and willows were rallied around her
in an endless caress of gently linked arms.
and silvery vines dangled sapphire bells,
jingling in the breezes like musical charms.

a medley of mammals soon flocked to her side
bringing comfort to the palisaded keep.
and they mounted a vigil to fend off harm
while serenading crickets lulled her to sleep.
when morning came and streaked the sky with amber
inquisitive nudgings brushed against her cheek.
and she breakfasted on pine nuts and berries
harvested by paws, and carried in a beak.

following a dazzle to a babbling brook
she imbibed its joyful effervescence
enfolding herself in the roots of an oak,
in the shade of its penetrating presence.
insightful impressions welled up to the surface
as she fathomed her lamentable plight,
pondering the queen's fell machinations
and the hazy dynamics of magical flight.
  
that Her Grace's hatred had sprouted arms and legs
was a painful development to face.
yet the singular help from the elements
cast a novel ray of light upon the case.
returning to her father's frosty castle
was without a doubt an injudicious course.
so she opted for staying right where she was,
throwing in her lot with the mystical force.
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- Evan Hawthorn, the 16th of April, 2016

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