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Monday, April 18, 2016

Yikes! (an excerpt from my novella-poem "Sludge White and the Seven Curmudgeons"

"it's got Sleazy!" Sappy managed to gasp
collapsing on the rim of the smoky ravine,
in a trembling frenzy to swallow air
unable to imagine how they'd intervene.
Mock, looking haunted, was utterly speechless
like a zombie or some other bloodless saint,
the ruddy and only pink-skinned Curmudgeon
gone beyond the pale and passing for a haint.

Nate pulled a chisel from his ruptured knapsack
and shakily attained his unsteady feet.
then he kissed Mock's forehead and started off,
as valiant a hero as one could hope to meet.

"where are you going?" Mock breathlessly asked,
toppling again from his bark-encrusted crutches.
"to have a go at saving our Sleazy.
i can't just leave him in that horrid thing's clutches."

as Nate descended into the gully,
Sappy sat up, and surveyed the scene with wonder.
"i have the impression we've been here before.
something to do with a housekeeping blunder.
why, this is the spot where we salvaged the sack,
with the watchrug and battlerack, remember?"

"me 'ead's in an awful muddle, Sappy.
i've a notion that beastie gave me distemper."

"surely not, silly old bean.  but come sit down.
i want to inspect those clotted bandages."
Mock winced while he warily lowered himself,
casting aside his knotted appendages.

Sappy visibly flinched from what he uncovered,
a ground up mash of puce and livid red;
the missing kneecap, several severed toes,
and the seeping, shredded skin, hanging by a thread.
his fingers were singed by a blistering fever
inflaming the tainted, shivering frame.
he was far from certain he'd ever recover
but harboured no doubts he'd been rendered lame.

"well, what do you think?" Mock placidly inquired,
gazing obscurely into the mire.

"i think i'll gather some fallen kindling.
it's high time we lighted a night-biding fire."

the titanic arachnid was rushing now
no longer constrained by the stealthy attack,
with Sleazy swaddled in a sticky wrapper
enthralled and strung aloft on a pincered rack.
as she hurtled forward on six of her legs
her banged up bounty holding fast in its glue,
Pasty's winged posse launched a frantic relay
scattering feathers but keeping her in view.

Nate's weary muscles were no match for this race
and he lost his footing on wandering roots,
stumbling in a slide of skating pebbles
letting go of the chisel and both tangled boots.
his spirit plunged ahead of his body,
railing at the clumsiness that caused his demise.
next to jettison was trust in himself,
bereft of the caress that lived in Pally's eyes.                                        

it was then that he noticed the strange, stinging nips
plaguing his limbs with myriad pinches,
like sustained bites from relentless insects
concurrently occurring every few inches.
it soon sunk in that he wasn't sinking
but heading instead toward a scrubby scrap of land,
clenched in the claws of Sludge White's familiars
uplifted by the grace of her avian band.

they tucked him in a secluded crevice
overlooking the chasm on a craggy ledge,
in the gnarled branches of a tree that twisted
inquisitive tendrils over the edge.
from there he observed the spider's progress
as his allies commenced an aerial assault,
pelting her eyes with formidable fury
till she sidled inside a shadowy fault.

and a squealing cacophony exploded
from the depths of a rather sizable cave,
to judge by the numberless fleeing bats
that swept from their sanctum in a dizzying wave.
the birds encircled the precarious entry
posting sentries for its keen-eyed tending,
and busied themselves selecting the perches
they'd need for a night spent preening and mending.

Nate's pendulous roost was rattled by a stork
letting slip from its beak a plump, leafy sling.
but finding the feathered folk fetching his boots
he divined they'd taken him under their wing.
he dined al fresco at a portable feast
served a la carte by a delicate sparrow,
as an omen formed in the misty distance
a single crow flying straight as an arrow.

in the regions above the vice-ridden vapors
the sky was suffused with orange and pink.
lament for the sun's repetitive orbit
had kindled the clouds that huddled on the brink.

the forest beneath was brooding in silence
sifting sediments and sighing in the shade,
as though it longed for the cover of sunset
and bided its time for the frail light to fade.

'i should never have trusted that creature.
there's not a sweeter web than spins from honeyed lies.
and what has she done?  how will they know me?
they'll never comprehend this improbable size.
the biclops brutals didn't have them.  that's clear.
ooh!  those tangles of tendrils!  that spongy skin!
plus the sharpened harpies splintered my vision,
so now i'm more helpless than i've ever been.

it's hard to believe they'd snatch my hatchlings.
i'd feel it in my spinnerets if it were true.
spite isn't skulking in their scant, frightened eyes.
this one's deceptive, but hasn't got a clue.
i see no reason to keep it trussed up
for the stink overpowers this miserable hole.
i'd fain unload it, yet still i wonder
if as well as the smell, it's saddled with a soul.'

the sun bled into the sizzling abyss
and celestial lava spilled out of its wake
firing the edges of lavender clouds,
a dazzling illusion of a vast burning lake.
encumbered below in an eddy of eagles,
billowing smudges and dark purple streaks
a bleary-eyed king glowered at the bleakness,
dodging the logic he'd eluded for weeks.

yet a novel notion distracted him
as he glanced from his aerie, adrift in the dusk.
an urgency encroached on his facile thoughts
making them uneasy in their crown-capped husk.
a consequential question had not been resolved
or he'd overlooked some critical thing.
and this feeling unflaggingly nagged him,
forever intruding like the itch from his ring.

these reveries receded with the sunlight
stranding conjecture on an ominous slope.
shadows seeped into regions of reason
ridding dimming prospects of unrequited hope.
***** * ***** * ***** * ***** * *****
- Evan Hawthorn, the 18th of April, 2016


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